LOVE this CYOA. Using this for a chars 'downtime' activities in a multi-CYOA story. Almost everywhere that it should be 'in' it says 'on' and some other repeated errors. I assume English is not your first language. Great work though.
Looks like page 4 is the previous version :
>Treefolk get Exoskeleton for free - nope
>Harpies in free Wings - nope
>Clipped Wings can use multiple times on the same fairy type - cannot remove more than on tag/type
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LOVE this CYOA. Using this for a chars 'downtime' activities in a multi-CYOA story. Almost everywhere that it should be 'in' it says 'on' and some other repeated errors. I assume English is not your first language. Great work though.
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Looks like page 4 is the previous version : >Treefolk get Exoskeleton for free - nope >Harpies in free Wings - nope >Clipped Wings can use multiple times on the same fairy type - cannot remove more than on tag/type